Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Redlands Review

The submission deadline is only two days away and I finally decided to submit two pieces this year to the Redlands Review. It is a literary magazine made up of students work and is published in early May. It's mostly for upper class, weird.. I guess that means me now. But anyways, here they are. It's a long shot, but I thought it would be fun. They're not too long, don't worry! :)

Hope in Dirt Floors

She studied the street to understand

Against the barbaric backdrop

That keeps its people kept,

The secrets that weigh above

The trees’ sway,

Native eyes searching

A quilt of patches

Brilliant around the edges.


She stood apart and

Needed to. The blanket was unraveling

And promise of better or

Heat would help that wound.


Mosquitoes and dirt floors,

Prayerful knees, soreness

That creeps up her back

Where she carries her babies.

Not standing around, no. No

Vision she, nor hope in dirt floors,

Nor brilliance around the edges.


Landscape, Skewed

With and from you

The raw air

Darkly in love

A perfect word


Female deities

Climb ivy to the sky


To evade compromise

Lights streak

The mist clatters

Through elegance


Warm white pictures

Make memories a valley

After cocktails, petals

Bend to their shadows.

All things seek the center

Of discourse


This mirror mine

A week’s chill

Embraces the touch


Of the phenomenal world.



2 comments:

Laurie said...

Awesome! I think that will be a well received submit to the paper, Mom

Dorm Bedding said...

Great work!!!!!